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Working on my first copy :) Please help.

by Aljiro
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Hi there wonderful people of WF. First of all I want to thank the wonderful community that has helped me so much!

Here I go.

I recently started to create my own product. It is a Slideshow Graphics Pack of sorts. I started on writing the sales page when I remembered I don't KNOW how to write copy I haven't really encountered copywriting before...

At the top of my head i have

Transform your boring videos to professional money making eye candy today!
As a headline. I think I need a better one. Please help if you have the time/patience.

Also please if you can suggest a few copywriting resources please do.

Thank you so much!

~Aljiro
#copy #working
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    Originally Posted by digitalphantom05 View Post

    Hi there wonderful people of WF. First of all I want to thank the wonderful community that has helped me so much!

    Here I go.

    I recently started to create my own product. It is a Slideshow Graphics Pack of sorts. I started on writing the sales page when I remembered I don't KNOW how to write copy I haven't really encountered copywriting before...

    At the top of my head i have



    As a headline. I think I need a better one. Please help if you have the time/patience.

    Also please if you can suggest a few copywriting resources please do.

    Thank you so much!

    ~Aljiro
    I'm not a pro copy writer either but there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with your proposed line from where I sit.
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    Just a very small comment but I think you should always focus on the positive (I used to hate when people said this but I know why now).

    I like:

    Transform Your Online Videos into...
    Professional Money Making Eye Candy Today!


    Then I would put a more benefit numbers oriented subheadline.

    How To Triple Your Sales With ...
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    I have no agenda but to help those in the same situation. This I feel will pay the bills.
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