I have a product in the pre-launch phase that I have had some traffic sent to.
My previous sales pages have all converted very well with the right traffic.
I think this copy should be a homerun for the target audience...
But I'm not sure based on early tests since it's not converting as well as I'd like (less than 10% which is poor for targeted traffic)
Title: Books that Sell
Audience: Non-fiction kindle authors looking to make money and sell more books
Sales page: Books That Sell | Ebook Bestseller Secrets
My thoughts: Still need to get better testimonials from users that have gone through the whole course and some authorities.
Legit sales page graphics.
Shorten it up? I don't usually do copy quite this long.
Message clarity... is it too vague what's being offer?
Alternative opening headline - I've Sold 2,978 Copies Of Non-Fiction Books... In ONE Day! Now You Can Discover My 'Bestseller Formulas' (Alternative: Secret Weapons) For Irresistible Books!
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