This is my third draft, but, I feel like it is missing something. I know its better than the last one I wrote. Let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed here.
[Need A Critique] Clothing Store Website Sales Letter
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Dear Reader,
This letter is for the glamorous woman whose excited to become a wonderful mom, but doesn't want to dress like a mom. So, if you're the type who loves to wear oversized t-shirts with holes and grease stains and sweat pants while you're pregnant then, read no farther, this is not for you.
Pink Blush Maternity presents an array of elite clothing at low prices. Including, elegant dresses so, you can take a night out on the town with your significant other and be stared at with the green-eye.
Go window shopping with your friends in style -- we provide a variety of chic and trendy looks, including, pants and blouses for your everyday wear.
You're not a size 0 celebrity with a baby bump? No worries, you can still look like a celebrity because our maternity clothes sizes range from XS - 3XL. To get your perfect fit, tap on our sizing guide.
Low price clothing so, you can spend your money on furnishing the new baby room.
So, what should you do NOW?
Right now, Pink Bush Maternity is offering you a $25 off coupon code. Plus, US shipping is free on orders $50 and over.Type in Code: PINK3 to get your $25 off on your order (this coupon code does not work on clearance items).
In addition, as a new customer, we would like to give you 20% off on your next order. Just sign up with us by email and we send you the 20% off coupon code.
Remember!
This invite is for the women who want to look beautiful while embarking on a new adventure only in style.
The gift just keep coming! Visit pinkblushmaterity.com now and recieve two black and grey tote bags with your order.
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