Judge My Very 1st Copy! ~IM newbie :)
I would like to receive a judgement/critique and Help on my very first attempt at a sales page. It is for my own product that is under heavy development.
Here is my sales page (still unfinished, need help):
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Please help me improve my sales page. Pretty please...
Thank you so much!
~Aljiro
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