Beginners email your views please
I work for an online freight exchange, we are a monthly subscription site aimed at the haulage industry and we introduce companies who need goods delivered to companies who are looking to fill their empty trucks.. A bit like Uship but B2B.
I am putting together an email campaign to get some people to sign up for a free trial of the site by simply replying to the email via a green button. My first attempt is below. Please let em know what you think.
I am a beginner and i understand that this will probably get slated but any constructive help would be great.
What our freight exchange does in a nut shell is help companies find loads and get loads delivered.
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Are you having trouble finding back loads for your trucks?
With over 90,000 loads every month our freight exchange will help you fill your trucks on return journeys.
But that's not all, you will also find outgoing loads, regular haulage work and be able to sub-out your loads too.
**Sign up for free trial button here - send to email**
**View today loads button here**
Have a look at some of the benefits:
• Save money and increase efficiency by finding back loads for your return journeys.
• Increase your revenue with real-time access to thousands of back loads, outgoing loads and regular loads.
• Take on extra work without having to increase your fleet by finding available vehicles on our exchange.
• Instant notifications when new loads are added in your area saving you time in having to call round for local haulage work.
• Check out existing members feedback & business documents before taking any jobs ensuring you know exactly who you are working with.
• Flexibility for your business, we do not tie you in to any long term contracts like other haulage exchange networks.
• Low membership fees of less than £1 a day, much lower than the competition.
We, company name, are the leading freight exchange in Europe and have been helping thousands of members find and cover haulage work for over 15 years. Hear what some of our members have to say about us.
''The biggest reason we would recommend Company Name is that it helps us sell our loads and find suppliers to build new relationships with.''
''Work I was previously looking at was only one way so Company Name has helped fill the gaps on back journeys.''
''Our Company Name subscription has been the best investment we have made for our business.''
''Company Name helps me cover my vehicles when they are in Europe, saving me from driving empty trucks and wasting fuel.''
We are currently offering you a no obligation, FREE, trial of our freight exchange.
All you need to do to take advantage of this FREE trial is click the 'Green' button to send us a quick email and we will do the rest.
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