Any good advice would be awesome...
I want to know about length, is it too long, too short, etc
I need to know if the offer is good with the price point
I need to know what is irrelevant content that I can cut out.
Don't want to take too much of anyone's time, but I respect everyone's opinion here and value their advice.
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