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I just finished putting together what is currently my "best" version of the sales copy for my Joomla videos package.
I tried my best to introduce a lot of the ideas that I have read in copy writing books, articles and reports and think that this is my best shot so far.
I am working on getting somebody to do the ecover for me, as I think I may be a little graphically challenged.
I want to "perfect" the sales copy as much as I can before I launch a full-scale traffic generation, JV or other marketing efforts, so that my visitors won't be landing on a "loser" page.
You can view the sales page here.
What changes do you think I should implement to spruce it up a little bit?
What should I put in or throw out to make the sales letter "magical" and magnetic?
I appreciate your detailed review and suggestions.
In return, I would like to reward the three best reviewers by writing each one of them a free, 100% unique, meticulously-researched, creatively-written, highly optimized, beautifully-formatted and thoroughly-proofread 500-word article in the niche of their choice.
The only niches that I won't write on are the adult, dating, alcoholic, gambling or other "unethical" niches.
And, lest you start thinking that you will be getting cheap, elementary school level articles, take a look at some of my articles here and here. (Please, overlook the design of that site, it is still a work-in-progress.
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You can also view some of my Squidoo lenses on various niches here.
Once again, thank you for your detailed review and your precious time.
Sincerely,
Muhammad Jalloh
Thank you for clicking in.
I just finished putting together what is currently my "best" version of the sales copy for my Joomla videos package.
I tried my best to introduce a lot of the ideas that I have read in copy writing books, articles and reports and think that this is my best shot so far.
I am working on getting somebody to do the ecover for me, as I think I may be a little graphically challenged.
I want to "perfect" the sales copy as much as I can before I launch a full-scale traffic generation, JV or other marketing efforts, so that my visitors won't be landing on a "loser" page.
You can view the sales page here.
What changes do you think I should implement to spruce it up a little bit?
What should I put in or throw out to make the sales letter "magical" and magnetic?
I appreciate your detailed review and suggestions.
In return, I would like to reward the three best reviewers by writing each one of them a free, 100% unique, meticulously-researched, creatively-written, highly optimized, beautifully-formatted and thoroughly-proofread 500-word article in the niche of their choice.
The only niches that I won't write on are the adult, dating, alcoholic, gambling or other "unethical" niches.
And, lest you start thinking that you will be getting cheap, elementary school level articles, take a look at some of my articles here and here. (Please, overlook the design of that site, it is still a work-in-progress.
)You can also view some of my Squidoo lenses on various niches here.
Once again, thank you for your detailed review and your precious time.
Sincerely,
Muhammad Jalloh
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