Critiques of Sales Page, please. Thank you.
I'm not much for hype, and my Sales Page is not long, either.
(Note: Revised Sales Page from 8/3/09).
My sales page is for a software application I developed. I'm putting together some short demo videos to link to the sales page as soon as I post this.
There's an eBox I threw together with GFX Writer by Incansoft while using the program the first time, so I know it's not up to par. Perhaps someone reading this will be kind enough to chime in with suggestions about it. I could not yet figure out how to add color to the box, therefore it almost blends into the white background.
Thanks,
Fabian
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