Need Critique For My First Landing Page!
I'd love it if some of you guys with experience could look over my first sales page, I used some other long form sales pages as an example (I also looked through this sticky, which was very helpful: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...-critique.html). It's not mobile ready right now and the page loading is kind of slow because I haven't compressed images yet so don't worry about that. Let me know what you think!
URL: Burning Fat Starts In The Kitchen
Emmy
Passive Income System
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