Thoughts on my home page, 2 paragraphs specificially?
I was wondering what you thought of my home page, if there were any blaring mistakes in copywriting?
My guide provides techniques that do work (the testimonials are real, as is my story), but it consists of information, and we're living in the information age, where google is very powerful.
So I included a section that says something like "My Techniques Are Unique and Cannot Be Found Elsewhere"... but I worry this sounds a bit "insecure" to me... what do you think? Usually when a copywriter says something like this, it can be perceived that the opposite is true? Or does it sound good to you?
I also included a section that says something like "how can I be so sure the guide works?" which is true, but I worry that it may sound a bit desperate? Or is it a good closer?
I'm thinking maybe the money back guarantee should be enough to assure this?
Thoughts please? Here's the link: https://goo.gl/Gkfk26
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