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Copy critic

by successproducts
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Hi

What do you think about this sales copy?

http://autocontentbuddy.com/

Thanks so much
#copy #critic
  • Profile picture of the author nmwf
    Originally Posted by successproducts View Post

    Hi

    What do you think about this sales copy?

    http://autocontentbuddy.com/

    Thanks so much
    Not good. Not good at all. What wrote it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Max Anderson
    Is english your native language?
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  • Profile picture of the author chrisnos
    It's not real enough, and doesn't promise concrete results.

    1: This product is for you if you really want to build passive income stream

    2: This product is for you if you want to make $542 minimum per day.

    1: God's forbid something happens to you and you can't go to work any more

    2. Imagine you have one accident, and suddenly you're forced to spend months at home, with no income -- how do you support yourself and the people you love?
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    • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
      Although the veal has lifted for me
      To a native English speaker, this is a dead giveaway that you aren't competent with the English language, and unfortunately it greatly reduces your credibility overall.

      At a minimum, you need an editor who can correct all the mistakes so this sounds like genuine English.

      Good luck,
      Marcia Yudkin
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