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Want to make more money per sale?

Say "because".

Want to make more money per hour?

Say "because".

Want "something"?

Say because.

As copywriters our goal is to get buyers to convert better than the control.

In other words, we have to convince, persaude, inform... whatever, better than the control.

Now, yes, we are emotional beings.

But, we need to rationalize our emotions.

And this is THE thing.

We need to impart logic into our copy so the buyer can convince himself to buy.

In other words, we need the "because".

Quick story:

My wife and I were late heading back to Los Angeles from Dublin. Like two hours late.

The the lines for security, then customs, then more customs, was really long.

What did we do to not miss out flight, spend another night in Dublin, and have to spend around $3,000 on last minute flights?

We whipped out our "becauses".

We skipped the line because of "because".

Turns out people are happy to let you cut if you have a "good because".

Another story:

I raised my fees this year by 30%.

Clients asked why.

"Because my wife wants me to spend more time with the family. She wants me to service less clients and be at home more. So I'm raising my fees so clients leave me, freeing up my time."

Sadly, most clients stayed, and my wife was still upset with me. Although, we did have more cash in the bank because of her.

The because, worked.

So here's the thing...

Always give your client, your copy, rational reasons to purchase. Give them enough "becauses".

And make it believable. Better yet, make it real.

Because when you do, good things usually happen.

Adam
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  • Recently, I was reading about Jia Jiang.

    Jia decided to overcome his fear of rejection.

    Came up with a personal program called 100 Days of Rejection.

    Here's his blog:

    100 Days of Rejection | Jia Jiang

    Very creative. His insights are a mind blow.

    PS: His examples and takeaways blow Cialdini's away. No joke. (Although Robert has obviously been an inspiration to many a marketer.)

    But don't take my word for it. Study this. It's inspiring. Trust me, you'll want to go out and try your own, like Adam did.

    PPS: Adam, I like your application of the "because" principle.
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    • Rick, thx for this resource! I'm devouring it right now.

      You always discover the most amazing sites, and are gracious enough to share with us.

      Adam

      p.s. If you had a "donate" button on your site for say $7 bucks to fuel to caffnee needs so you could post more resources, I'd donate.

      pps. do you sleep?

      "Buy RIck a Coffee"




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  • I remember reading a book about persuasion where a group of psychologists or scientists tested the word "because".

    It was a college, with a long line of people waiting to print. The scientists asked a guy to attempt to jump in line with a given sentence. It didn't have the word "because" in it, so he did it to no avail. But he came a second time and asked if he could skip in-front "because" he was in a hurry or something like that.

    And his results sky rocketed. Most people allowed him.

    Anyway, it was a long time a go so I don't really remember the details of the story, but I just came to vouch for the word "because".
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    • Bingo.

      That's where my wife got the idea.

      She's a pyshcologist.

      thx for adding that!

      do you know the source? I was looking for it in my post, but couldn't find it, so I didn't include it.

      adam


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  • good tip. I've been using it for years and it works.
  • Fantastic book Rick: 100 Days of Rejection | Jia Jiang // in line with Cialdini's work.
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  • That's Gary Bencivenga favorite word used in his letters as well. He uses it
    a lot throughout his copy and for good reasons. Powerful word, just because ...

    -Ray Edwards

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