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Put the Get Started Now button above the fold.

Is that the Motley Fool Penny Stock technique where they jack the stock price up 352%, blog about the HUGE price increase & then cash out?

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DR0832 7 years ago

No it is not. It's about how to profit off situations that cause huge price increases and volatility.
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thesadshow

7 years ago

I think it looks pretty good. I think you should leave the bottom button where it is and add a second button higher up on the page, maybe with a different call to action.

The bottom button was above the fold for me and I think it will work well there, but you should also have a button higher up. The eye tends to drift to the upper left when a page is first loaded, so if you wanted to get really technical you could put the video on the right side and then put another button on the left towards the top.

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ewenmack 7 years ago

We know nothing about who is going to be reading it,
which means it's like firing a shot at a target we can't see!

Wanna help us out so we can help you?

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Doctor E. Vile
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DR0832

7 years ago

It's directed at people that want to learn to trade stocks successfully, not invest for the long term. I've been a full time trader since 2002.

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ewenmack

7 years ago

Originally Posted by DR0832

It's directed at people that want to learn to trade stocks successfully, not invest for the long term. I've been a full time trader since 2002.

And have they had any experience in trading?

Are you going to a list of buyers?

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DR0832

7 years ago

I have a list of my buyers but this page is for new targeted traffic. Most people have no experience or they have experience but have lost money. The majority of people lose money when involved in the financial markets whether it be stocks, options, forex, futures, etc., because they don't know what they are getting themselves into, or what they are up against. On top of this they treat it like playing the lottery rather than like a business.

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ewenmack

7 years ago

Originally Posted by DR0832

I have a list of my buyers but this page is for new targeted traffic. Most people have no experience or they have experience but have lost money. The majority of people lose money when involved in the financial markets whether it be stocks, options, forex, futures, etc., because they don't know what they are getting themselves into, or what they are up against. On top of this they treat it like playing the lottery rather than like a business.

Were your buyers derived online or offline?

Offline ones have a much higher long term value.

Would you say existing customers are good,
in terms of them keep buying from you?

If they are good,
then we can run your database through
a computer system which will mine
for a similar audience.

From this, we can go after a precise audience with a laser target message
to deliver you a response and buyers unlike you could by other means.

If your existing customer base is less than desired, then we can target those that have brokerage accounts, those with $100,000 plus in it, buy training to get good at trading.

This means you are talking to the converted, not trying to convince
the non converted.

A much more profitable way to do business.

Is this what you want?

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Doctor E. Vile

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DR0832 7 years ago

I have a list of people that already bought my first product which is a 150 pg ebook. They are not offline customers. I also have a second product which is a 277 page ebook and a list of buyers of that product as well. Very few people searching for this sort of information have $100k. Most are lucky to have $1k. I typically suggest people don't start unless they have $2k and even then that's very little.
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- ewenmack 7 years ago
  
  So can your experience and knowledge help those that have $100,000
  in trading accounts?
  
  I'm directing you to the money.
  
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  Doctor E. Vile
  
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  DR0832 7 years ago
  
  Yes these people can make millions. Not exaggeration.
  
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  ewenmack 7 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by DR0832
  
  Yes these people can make millions. Not exaggeration.
  
  But can you help these people?
  
  If so, then they are a better market than those
  who are trying to find change under the couch seats.
  
  Right?
  
  Best,
  Doctor E. Vile
  
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  DR0832 7 years ago
  
  Yes I can help them, however there are many more people who are looking for change under the couch. If I could charge $5k instead of $100 or $200 like I currently do, that would be different.
  
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DR0832

7 years ago

Anymore input?

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Tim R 7 years ago

Originally Posted by DR0832

Anymore input?

It wouldn't hurt to hit the thanks button for Ewen and others who have offered advice.

If you seem appreciative of people's time and advice, rather than expecting it, you're more likely to get people wanting to help.

This isn't just directed at you, there's many people that seem to think this forum is a free critique service.
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Adam Yunker

7 years ago

Hey DR0832,

You should have a newsletter that they can opt-in to learn more on how to kill I with affiliate marketing!

Make it a popup after they been on the site so long. Since the traffic you're directing is interested in becoming an affiliate with you that means they want to make money so show them exactly how to make money promoting your product.

Also you'll be building a list whom you can also monetize at a later point in time.

Just an idea, hope this helps

Adam

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DR0832 7 years ago

I already do this but thanks Adam.
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