Need some help with Landing Page Copy

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Hi if you have knowledge please take a look at my landing page and let me know what you think. Thanks link
#copywriting #copy #landing #page
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    Put the Get Started Now button above the fold.

    Is that the Motley Fool Penny Stock technique where they jack the stock price up 352%, blog about the HUGE price increase & then cash out?
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    • No it is not. It's about how to profit off situations that cause huge price increases and volatility.
  • I think it looks pretty good. I think you should leave the bottom button where it is and add a second button higher up on the page, maybe with a different call to action.

    The bottom button was above the fold for me and I think it will work well there, but you should also have a button higher up. The eye tends to drift to the upper left when a page is first loaded, so if you wanted to get really technical you could put the video on the right side and then put another button on the left towards the top.
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    • We know nothing about who is going to be reading it,
      which means it's like firing a shot at a target we can't see!

      Wanna help us out so we can help you?

      Best,
      Doctor E. Vile
  • It's directed at people that want to learn to trade stocks successfully, not invest for the long term. I've been a full time trader since 2002.
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    • And have they had any experience in trading?

      Are you going to a list of buyers?

      Best,
      Doctor E. Vile
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  • Anymore input?
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    • It wouldn't hurt to hit the thanks button for Ewen and others who have offered advice.

      If you seem appreciative of people's time and advice, rather than expecting it, you're more likely to get people wanting to help.

      This isn't just directed at you, there's many people that seem to think this forum is a free critique service.
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  • Hey DR0832,

    You should have a newsletter that they can opt-in to learn more on how to kill I with affiliate marketing!

    Make it a popup after they been on the site so long. Since the traffic you're directing is interested in becoming an affiliate with you that means they want to make money so show them exactly how to make money promoting your product.

    Also you'll be building a list whom you can also monetize at a later point in time.

    Just an idea, hope this helps

    Adam
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    • I already do this but thanks Adam.
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