Dare I ask for another review?

Like Ken, I think this copy needs a lot of tightening. A LOT.

I like the "clean lines" of the layout, but so many graphics are distracting. I found my eye constantly drawn away from the copy to some graphic or the other. With the reader's eyes going left to right to down to side - you're making it a lot of work for them to focus on your message.

I'm also not a fan of the green headlines and the drop shadow. That particular color makes me feel like I should be reading about yoga or zen or saving the rainforest. Doesn't convey "money" for me (if that's what you were aiming for). The drop shadow, I just find distracting.

Watch the run-on sentences and "passive voice" in your copy. It's sucking the energy out of your message. I'd also rearrange the order of the copy items in your sidebar to enhance your credibility elements.

And tie your bonus in to the main product. "Turn past money-management mistakes upside down" implies that you're talking to the foreclosure market. Which may be a sub-section of your readers, but may well turn off those who aren't. And your main body of copy that precedes the bonus has gone in a whole different direction.

Also, "Get Your Complimentary Copy Today!!!!!" made me expect a sign up form for a freebie. Again - distracting slowdown.

Copy on the order form is weak. Look at some of the successful order forms (don't have to be in your market). Go thou, and do likewise.

Overall, the flow needs work, too. You get us going in one direction - and then you switch or reverse. Example here:

sub head: You say, "Understand that concept and you're one step closer to finding the buyer willing to pay your price!"

(reader thinking, "Buyer willing to pay my price!? Yeah! Excellent! Exactly what I want! Let's get going right ..." )

*sound of squealing brakes*

Because you just broke into that forward momentum with, "But let's not pack up the dog and start loading the truck just yet..."

And segue into 'hard work concept' of "There's still much to be done..."

(reader thinking, "Oh. I thought you were going to make it easy for me...:confused

You jump around in your talking points, too. You're talking about housing markets, and untrained realtors, and understanding purpose of staging, and housing market, and staging techniques, and knowing or not knowing interior design, and buyer reaction, and "probably" having fun learing to stage, and housing market, and...

You get the picture.

Complete each talking point and allow one point to lead naturally into the next.

For example:
- The housing market is at its lowest point in decades.

- In just a couple of years it has switched from a sellers' market to a buyers' market.

- This means that buyers can be very choosy.

- It also means that sellers have to work harder to attract buyers willing to pay their asking price.

- Most sellers can't sell their homes for the price they want.

- Because these sellers don't know the "professional's" secrets to attracting the buyers they want.

- And there ARE secrets.

- Such as Secrets 1, 2, 3.

- The most important secret is presenting your home the way a buyer wants to see it.

- That's called "staging".

- Staging is the main secret used by professionals.

- Because staging gets you your asking price, especially in a tough market.

And so on.

You've got some good basics to work with here, and some obvious design skills. Clean up, trim, and tighten, and you'll be in pretty good shape.