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Please Help Me Choose a Headline

by Igor Kheifets
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Hey Warriors,

I can't decide which headline is best, please share opinions..

Company: Mastermind Marketing
Theme: Mindset and Marketing Combined Information product

Headlines:

1. Flip the switch on your marketing success
2. Attract marketing success by will, not by default
3. Get more oppotunity, respect and exposure for your business

Igor
#choose #headline
  • Profile picture of the author CDarklock
    The last one is more benefit-focused; I'd reorder to exposure, opportunity, and respect though, and drop the word "get."

    More exposure, opportunity, and respect for your business
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  • Profile picture of the author colmodwyer
    I would say the last one is the lesser of three evils...

    Is (are?) "opportunity, respect and exposure" specific benefits that mean anything to your reader?

    Colm
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  • Profile picture of the author nontemplates
    NO 3 but I would change the get which has the connotation of just going out and buying something to a process word closer to what you will probably be teaching -

    Create more oppotunity, respect and exposure for your business.
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