Thank You in advance - I have made the revisions based on previous feedback. And now have version 2 below, if you can check it that would be incredible.
Can you do a "CUB" on it. benschop86 suggested this on the last revision.
They should point out anything 1) Confusing 2) Unbelievable or 3) Boring
Kindle Lifestyle Formula – sales page sample for critique
Any other thoughts, comments and feedback would be super cool
Thank You again.