"Reason why" in copywriting

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Which copywriting great was it who first and most influentially discussed the importance of giving a "reason why" in copywriting?

Thanks in advance for refreshing my memory on this. I'm not at home and don't have my copywriting library handy!

Marcia Yudkin
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    John E Kennedy.
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  • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
    Thanks, Andrew.

    I found a copy of John E Kennedy's book online (it's public domain) at bluelynxmarketing.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/reason_why_advertising.pdf

    What I am looking for is a clear explanation of WHY it is essential to provide an explanation when you have a possibly-too-good-to-be-true offer. I'll be back asking for more if Kennedy didn't actually explain this!

    Marcia Yudkin
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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    Great question Marcia. I had come to post John E. Kennedy as the answer to remind you when I saw the thread and I think it's a great idea to refresh our memories with the principles of the old time masters. He's also the one who said, "Advertising is salesmanship in print."

    I'd like to share a few thoughts we can call Why Reason Why Copywriting.

    In a single sentence, in the absence of a good reason to buy your product, they won't, because there's no good reason to buy it.

    Humans are duty bound to a sense of purpose. In the absence of purpose we search for a replacement to fill that void. If your too good to be true offer appeals to their emotional yearning to either fill the void directly or otherwise fulfill a lesser purpose, they now search for the practical purpose of the product to justify purchasing it. That's where your solid reason why comes in to assure them they aren't just acting on impulse to fulfill a mere emotional need, but that they also have a valid, very practical purpose they will fulfill with your product.

    You let them off the hook for being such a human emotional creature and give them that reason why to buy so they feel smart for making such a wise and logical purchase.

    The French have the lovely expression for this. It's your product's raison d'être.

    Its "reason to be".

    The underlying power is we also each have the need to fulfill our own raison d'être.

    Once we discover it, we aim to become the best possible version of our fullest potential and realize it completely.

    Fulfilled, if you will.

    In psychology that's what "self-actualization" is.

    Purpose is so fundamental.

    Emmanuel Kant's philosophy suggests the "categorical imperative" and makes for interesting reading when read with an eye for the relationship between how duty motivates action.

    I've always said the closer you can align your offer to fulfill the purpose of solving your market's problem with a solution that ends their pain, the more successful your offer will be.

    To be more effective, we become more selective.

    We discard that which distracts from the purpose and we magnify that which fulfills it.
    So one part philosophical, one part psychological, one part emotional and one part logical all equal an important ingredient to the sales success recipe, in my opinion, when it comes to crafting effective reason why copywriting.

    In a single sentence, in the absence of a good reason to buy your product, they won't, because there's no good reason to buy it.

    ^ Why should they, anyway?

    Now that's where you come in with the answer and clinch the sale.

    Of course you already got their attention with a bold promise, qualified them and established your credibility by demonstrating you know what their problem is and that your product can solve it, made your offer unique, discredited alternatives, demonstrated proof, and explained the benefits of buying your product and all the ways it can make their life better and all the other "must have" elements of a winning ad. (That's outside the scope of this post, but all of that is covered in my book Get The Click for those who want to get all the exact ingredients to a winning ad, where to use them in what order and how to do it all. That's why it was written.) So, yes, you'll remove all the risk and close the sale with a guarantee that is created to function as a selling device for you in a very specific way soon enough, but first let's look more at why the reason why.


    Your reason why message, in its essence, assigns your offer a purpose. Its purpose is that it is the solution to a problem or a fulfillment of a desire, or both.

    The reason your product exists is always to solve their current problem and/or make their future life better.

    This is also why agitating the problem (twisting the knife) tends to be so effective because once our prospect is effectively reminded of how much their problem sucks, they are acutely aware of their need and desire to solve it.

    When you help them connect the dots between their need and your product with the "reason why" it's so important to solve that problem of which you have just made them so painfully reminded and aware, their desire to purchase your solution (because it solves their problem, meets their need and fulfills its purpose) now naturally becomes the by product.




    Johnson, Robert, "Kant's Moral Philosophy", The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy (Summer 2014 Edition), Edward N. Zalta (ed.), URL = <http://plato.stanford.edu/archives/sum2014/entries/kant-moral/>
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    • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
      Actually it turns out that Robert Cialdini said more about offering reasons than did John E. Kennedy. However, Cialdini talked mostly about offering reasons in the context of making requests, not so much about making special offers. But I believe I can work out the chain of reasoning on my own now.

      I think it mainly has to do with not allowing doubt a foothold.

      For example, while we're in Hawaii, my husband keeps finding very expensive sunglasses in the ocean. (He is a good swimmer; people lose the sunglasses when they are paddleboarding or boogie boarding. Some items would have cost $300-$400 new.) There is no way to identify the owners of these items as they may have been lost a week or more previously and the owners would have already gone home. So we sell the good items that are in very good condition on eBay.

      If I didn't say anything about how I came to have these sunglasses, people might worry that they were fake. People might also look in my selling history and think that it's suspicious for me to be selling so many different good-brand used sunglasses and not many other kinds of items.

      So in my listings I briefly say how I came to have these sunglasses to sell. From Cialdini's chapter on providing reasons we know that offering any reason makes the proposition more convincing that offering no reason. This appears to be true even if the reason doesn't really explain much when you think deeply about it, or if the reason isn't that plausible.

      In information marketing, the parallel is that if you suddenly lower your prices without giving any reason, people's minds start whirling - why? But if you say "because it's my birthday" or "because my wife is making me clean out my closets" then the mind stops worrying.

      This doesn't relate to anything rational, of course, but to our human thinking shortcuts.

      Marcia Yudkin
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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    That's it Marcia.

    I remember reading Influence The Psychology of Persuasion several years ago.

    It really is a good thing to remember.

    Not long ago, I bought a pair of Versace sunglasses online. They came with a certificate of authenticity from Versace and a money back guarantee.

    As you and your husband might guess, there were still dozens of comments from people wondering how they could possibly be real, it was too good to be true, etc.


    In a single sentence, in the absence of a good reason to buy your product, they won't, because there's no good reason to buy it.
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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      Many people buy without a logical justification.

      The want it, so they buy it. Period.

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  • Profile picture of the author DougBarger
    ^ Yes, in that case their reason why is their "I want it" and to them it's a good reason.

    Alex makes a good point too. The reason why isn't limited to only logical justifications. You don't want to neglect to tap into the emotional reasons people should buy from you.
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  • You could mebbe hand 'em in.

    Not everyone in Hawaii is a non-local.

    Tellya, if I lived in Hawaii, I would be 24/2 beach beach beach.

    So mebbe somea those sungogs are reunitable with their owners.

    I love your story here, an' I figure there is a cool take on how sumtimes the truth gotta be made more truthful in order to persuade people who might flip on in to the product>dollars nature of the deal from another perspective.

    "Those glasses must be fake!!!"

    I see the possibility of that certainty.

    I see also the certainty that "the owners would already have gone home" is not the only possibility.

    You got a wouldy on there.

    But wider out in the order of all things here is the question of reason.

    In the absence of a self-spawnin' vacuum, you gotta figure that all actions are taken (or witheld from occurin') on the basis of Prompts Thrust.

    Who creates order from the pulse of worldly thrusts?

    Especially in an information-rich thrustitude such as we now have c/o the web?

    I figure the nature of narrative jus' got a whole lot more lusciously complex.

    Carvin' out an arc for your steps got more free play now, more reasonably possible angles, speeds an' skips of feet swung out onto ground.

    That's why my response to mucha what I hear about persuasion is F*CK OFF!

    Quit tryin' to smart me outta my life with yesterday's options for freedom!

    Gotta figure that more people gonna seek to swat pre-supposed drivel from view as they throw out a path before them.

    So I would prolly miss the sunglasses, out there in the blue.

    I would be the other way up.
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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      Kudos to John E. Kennedy. He recognized that people have reasons for buying stuff, gave it an official-sounding name ("Reason Why Advertising"), and rose to prominence based on it.

      Great positioning for him, but otherwise, a big to-do about nothing as far as I'm concerned.

      People have a mix of emotional and logical reasons for buying stuff. Learn what they are and how to use them in copy. It's no more complicated than that.

      Alex
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      • Profile picture of the author dmaster555
        Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

        Kudos to John E. Kennedy. He recognized that people have reasons for buying stuff, gave it an official-sounding name ("Reason Why Advertising"), and rose to prominence based on it.

        Great positioning for him, but otherwise, a big to-do about nothing as far as I'm concerned.

        People have a mix of emotional and logical reasons for buying stuff. Learn what they are and how to use them in copy. It's no more complicated than that.

        Alex
        You seem to be exceptionally good at completely missing the point of a thread and making a comment just for the hell of it.

        And the "reason why" in this case, is not referring to why the consumer is buying. It is referring to having a reason why, or a "justification" in your sales pitch to remove the skepticism from your buyers mind.

        For example:

        I am selling apples for 1 cent.

        I may want to include a reason why in my ad to prevent majority of people assuming that these apples are rotten to the core, as there must be no good reason for them to be sold for 1 cent...

        Of course, this is where I provide them with a good, logical reason why to remove this fear from their thought process.

        I think it is fairly obvious why you'd need a reason why to make this unbelievable offer convert better.

        Simply put, it is a question that the buyer will have, and you should always aim to address any concerns the prospect might have, preferably before they have it.
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        • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
          I think it is fairly obvious why you'd need a reason why to make this unbelievable offer convert better.

          Simply put, it is a question that the buyer will have, and you should always aim to address any concerns the prospect might have, preferably before they have it.
          What the research shows, however, is that it doesn't need to be a good reason, a relevant reason or a logical reason. There just needs to be a reason given.

          This is far from obvious.

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          • Profile picture of the author CopyMonster
            Originally Posted by marciayudkin View Post

            What the research shows, however, is that it doesn't need to be a good reason, a relevant reason or a logical reason. There just needs to be a reason given.

            This is far from obvious.

            Marcia Yudkin
            My mom always said "Because I said so..."

            It doesn't matter what the reason is; there just needs to be one.

            Since the time our brains could rationalize, man has had an innate desire for purpose - no matter how large or small it is.

            "To be or not to be" that is the question...


            Just be-cause...
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            Scary good...
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  • I have a proprietary method that I am delighted to share with you all.

    It's called "Reason Why? - The Lockdown" © Steve The Copywriter.

    Rather than 1 RW.

    You can be adventurous and give 2 RW's.

    At times you can go a little berserk and use 3 RW's (or more if they are really good).

    This lets you mix a range of RW's with the intention that some or all will resonate perfectly with your readers - rather than risk a one shot attempt which may miss.

    I've found it works like a dream because…

    (RW1) it answers the nagging question your prospect has (and they probably won't buy until they get the answer). (RW2) it can be quirky but still gives an "answer" remember the brain is searching for any answer - and you want it to intrigue your prospect in a positive way ("Yes, I'll buy it because of that") and (RW3) the more good reasons there are to to do something - the more likely it is that your prospect will do it.

    Hope this is of use.


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author Jonathan 2.0
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    Originally Posted by marciayudkin View Post

    Which copywriting great was it who first and most influentially discussed the importance of giving a "reason why" in copywriting?
    There's a great explanation from Gary Bencivenga at MarketingBullets.com (See Bullet No. 9)


    Dear Marketing Top Gun: My friends, star marketers Alex Mandossian and Yanik Silver, recently paid me a compliment by calling me, "The world's greatest living reason-why copywriter."

    I consider it such high praise because my mentor, David Ogilvy, was in my view the greatest reason-why copywriter of all time. In fact, when asked by a reporter if he was a strong proponent of "reason why" advertising, Ogilvy responded, "Is there any other kind?"
    MarketingBullets.com

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  • Profile picture of the author havplenty
    People buy because of emotions. But they actually have a conversation in their head right before they hit the submit button. Just before that convo starts is where you make your sales argument. If you do a good job that conversation leads to a single thought: "I can click submit now because this purchase makes perfect sense."

    That's one perspective on the matter, Hope it helps.
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