Critique my copy for hotel website?
The guidelines provided by ownership were so vague and fuzzy I won't even bore you with them. Suffice it to say they provided a cliche list of keywords (in Italian) such as Italian design, refined, comfort, travertine, materials, family, business, leisure, location, etc., and sent me a few floor plans and a few catalogue pics for some of the furniture they selected. No photos of the place are available as it is currently undergoing renovation.
I concluded that their UVP must be the combination of stylish Italian design interiors + spacious and comfortable living quarters + 4-star hotel amenities at an excellent bang-for-your-buck. One big issue is that said "amenities" include an elegant bistro and a trendy lounge bar, which however will not be open until 4-6 months after the "residence" itself... (so we're planning on keeping mostly quiet about those features, but without lying or deceiving)
Finally, keep in mind that the target audiences are expected to be mostly Russians, Germans, French, Italians, eventually some East Asians, and possibly a few Brits, so while English was chosen as a lingua franca, the site will be speaking to a public of non-native english speakers. Therefore, they specifically requested that I don't get too wordy or clever, but just keep it simple and stick to the facts.
Ok, so without further ado, here goes... (the following are just rough drafts the "about" section, the "business travel" section, and the "location and suggested itineraries section")
prague drafts - DC Solutions Consulenza Linguistica a Firenze
Now go to town! DESTROY ME!
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