The audio testimonial is so bad... and sounds so fake you will lose all credibility right there.

If the woman in the picture doesn't speak english then don't use an audio. But using such a phony sounding actress (or robot or whatever it was) makes you look like a fraud.

Barakos,

I'm not sure how many times we can kick this horse
before it stays dead.

I realize that you don't have much money.
I understand that you are desperate to make this work.
It doesn't...

What a letter like this demands more than anything else
is SINCERITY, authenticity...

Vin is absolutely right (duh) about that testimonial KILLING
whatever credibility you might have (which is to say NONE).

Red is better than purple. That's an improvement...

Otherwise, it's still stuck in the gate.

1. I wouldn't consider reading your 1st paragraph - a sea of text seems like work to me
2. Your formatting is all over the place
3. The page feels too wide (for me anyway)
4. Your stock photos for the testimonials are obviously fake
5. 60 days is too short a guarantee considering most women start planning their wedding 365 days in advance (often more). Even more so when you look at the planner bonus, which would imply that the bride to be is in the early stages of their planning, not less than 60 days away
6. The line "especially perfect" is an oxymoron and therefore makes no sense
7. There's no hook
8. There's no specific benefits implied (at least, not that I could spot on arrival)
9. There's no USP
10. There's no price justification
11. You say it's normally sold for $99 - I say "so what?", because I don't see proof, or a reason why you're selling it for over 50% off...and I certainly don't see the value which warrants $99

I hope this helps, good luck and keep at it!

Nick

Always nice being here...