I'm want to reach out to them either by email.
I am no copywriter and would appreciate your thoughts on my short sales pitch below, and any suggestions you may have:
PLEASE SEE MY UPDATE ON POST #30
YOUR BUSINESS WEBSITE ON PAGE 1 OF GOOGLE WITHIN 48 HOURS... GUARANTEED !
No Expensive Advertising Required... Just Your Website On Page One.
"What if This Could Help You Generate More Customers & Sales For Your Business...Today?"
Dear Mr Biz Owner,
Hi, my name is Zoro.
My company specializes in ranking local business websites on page one in Google.com. If this is something that interests you, then I can guarantee to have your website on page one within 48 hrs, for selected search keywords as matched to your business and industry.
Yes, it's a bold claim, but its true.
"What if your brand was showcased on the first page of Google, do you think you would find more customers and make more sales?"
This offer is only available to 1 local business in Dallas. If I don't hear from you within next 7 days, this offer will be directed to one of your competitors.
Want to find out more? I can be reached at .......
So to be clear again, I'm not a copywriter but I will be pleased with any suggestions you have.
Also, for your information, here is why I can guarantee them first page: I rank my own sites on 1st page, then I overlay the clients site on top of mine. Client site is now on page one of Google until he stops paying me.