New to writing sales pages - Input needed!

Hi Laura!

Here are a couple thoughts:

1. Headline could be stronger, could ask the viewer a question about how much they want to reach the number one slot on Google.

2. Video - needs controls, audio has a tendency to drop off and it is a little confusing what exactly is going on for the first five seconds mainly due to the fact that it is hard to hear (had speakers nearly at max and still had trouble)

The autoloop could also be turned off

For the video, I would start with a splash page containing your main message - ie, what EasyTrafficBuilder can do for you - Then show the result after two weeks. In other words, make it to the punch a lot quicker - remove unnecessary screens and maybe have just a little more enthusiasm in the voice over. Consider reading your copy from the rest of the site IN the video

- so:

Video flow could go like this:

Splash Page
Ask a question
Show your result
Talk about how EASY it is
Show your result
Ending splash page - this could be you message

Basically, since you are selling a course that includes video training - your example video has to really go above and beyond - otherwise, people may wonder if it's going to be hard to hear the instructions on your regular videos.

Other than that - you have a great start and what looks like a very useful product!