In copywriting, Whats your favorite headline formula?

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Hi warriors! In copywriting, my favorite and dearest headline formula goes like this:

(btw I understand that you CAN'T apply one formula or may be any formula to all the headlines of your sales page. But still, these are those little frameworks that help us decide whether our headlines are spot-on or not.)

My favorite headline formula

I call it the "yaaay!" and the "booo" effect.

The yaaay and the boo effect applies to every hook-sentence you will ever create. Whether it’s a headline, a beginning sentence of your sales page or a call to action; this is your savior, your secret recipe. Let me explain it with solid working examples:

Yaayy! = The solution you are offering, that, if worked would leave your customers with a happy excited yaaay! For example “How to melt down all your tummy fat in 30 days” is a yaaay. It solves your prospect’s problem and entices an expression of success and completion (30 days).

Boo = This is a sacrifice your prospect fears. In the example given above, your audience is afraid of the sacrifices he/she might have to make for example “work-out for 2 hrs daily” or “curbing down on delicious food.” People don’t want the boo effect yet they love the yaay!

So, my secret favorite headline blue print goes like this:

“If you aren’t addressing your prospect’s boo in your headline, you are naturally allowing your reader's attention to sweep away from the “yaay!” and stick to the boo. THIS IS SOMETHING YOU CAN’T AFFORD.

You have to address your audience fears right away. Tell them that it requires little sacrifice, little hard work.

So, the above example, with the “boo” addressed, goes like this: “How to melt down all your tummy fat without cutting down on your delicious food”

Here are few other quick examples to let this concept sink in:

How to learn python language(yaaay!) without giving away your 9-5 job?(boo)

• Are you interested in a business training that helps you go from a 9-5 job (yaay!) to a business that keeps working even when you are not?(boo)
.

How to take your web design near to the Picasso’s artistry (yaay!) without even hiring Picasso (which would be quite expensive, right?) (boo).


This is my pet formula when it comes to crafting headlines. I would love to know, what's yours?

P.S I was reading this article in a health magazine which said that every Doctor has his own Personal drug. A personal drug is the doctor's favorite drug which he prescribes to his patients very often and it varies from physician to physician.

So, copywriters, what's your "PERSONAL DRUG" for your "PATIENTS"?

Thanks in advance!
Junaid
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  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
    I don't have any favorite headline structure.

    What I do, is take into consideration what the ideal client/customer
    experienced...either as a customer or seen marketing messages
    about the product/service.

    This is because if the prospect has had a bad experience
    or has no interest in the subject, I need the message not
    look like what he or she associates as bad.

    If your favorite headline structure is...

    "How To [do something] In [time]
    Without [the bad stuff]"


    And you use it in the weight loss market,
    then your readers have seen it all before.

    Wasted space.

    Delete.

    Use it in the home services marketplace and you'll look like the one
    that let the home owner down badly.

    Market Match v's Formula Headlines

    I know which one to use every time.

    Best,
    Ewen
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    • Profile picture of the author Junaid khawaja
      Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

      I don't have any favorite headline structure.

      What I do, is take into consideration what the ideal client/customer
      experienced...either as a customer or seen marketing messages
      about the product/service.

      This is because if the prospect has had a bad experience
      or has no interest in the subject, I need the message not
      look like what he or she associates as bad.

      If your favorite headline structure is...

      "How To [do something] In [time]
      Without [the bad stuff]"


      And you use it in the weight loss market,
      then your readers have seen it all before.

      Wasted space.

      Delete.

      Use it in the home services marketplace and you'll look like the one
      that let the home owner down badly.

      Market Match v's Formula Headlines

      I know which one to use every time.

      Best,
      Ewen
      Hi Ewen! Perfect response! I have actually mentioned the fact that headlines formulas may or may not work in sales pages/ads (at the very beginning of the thread). And you have beautifully described why, in some cases, it WON'T work.

      Knowing your prospects is important and so do the fact that some messages are over-used so much that they have lost their charm. Especially, the weight loss headline example I gave.

      I think Knowing which one to go for; market Match or Formulla headlines --comes with experience.
      Thanks
      -J
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  • Profile picture of the author Oziboomer
    Originally Posted by Junaid khawaja View Post

    So, copywriters, what's your "PERSONAL DRUG" for your "PATIENTS"?
    Not being a chatbot and genuinely getting to understand the market and outcome my clients deserve.

    Only after that understanding is reached can a truly personal solution start to take shape.

    Best regards,

    Ozi
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    • Profile picture of the author Junaid khawaja
      Originally Posted by Oziboomer View Post

      Not being a chatbot and genuinely getting to understand the market and outcome my clients deserve.

      Only after that understanding is reached can a truly personal solution start to take shape.

      Best regards,

      Ozi
      Hi Ozi, couldn't agree more!

      Geniunely understanding your markets needs,wants, dreams and dreads comes before any headline or hook-generating formulla. It's the first vital step!
      Thanks for your insights!
      -J
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  • Profile picture of the author 1Bryan
    I'll give you mine, just for entertainment purposes:

    Tabloid headlines.

    They make me LOL. Especially the ones in the UK. And that's really more of a style than it is a formula.

    For copy? In order to sell?

    It all depends.

    Ewen already told you why.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sven300
    My standard headline formula, ma personal default formula is:

    1) Short (less than 65 characters)

    2) The sentence must begin with either a number (3, 5, 7, 10, 12, etc.), a verb ( discover, increase, create, compare, join, become, get, etc) or a question (why, what, when, who, where, how)

    3) Influential adjective or adverb ( free, new, instantly, secret, amazing, revolutionary, simple, easy, fast, effortlessly, miracle, suddenly, powerfull, etc)

    4) Keyword

    5) Promise (enticing for the targeted audience)

    It's simple and it works.

    But...

    I am always ready to give up my formula for adjusting to the situation, the market and the client. Because this is what distinguishes a parrot from a competent person.

    Therefore, I think formulas (in general) are valid but must be seen more as a starting point rather than an absolute rule.

    P.S. I think the yaayy / boo concept is interesting! But I imagine it will almost always contradict point one of my formula: the brevity. (Anyway many of the best Victor Schwab headlines were rather long, isn't? )
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    • Profile picture of the author Junaid khawaja
      Originally Posted by Sven300 View Post

      My standard headline formula, ma personal default formula is:

      1) Short (less than 65 characters)

      2) The sentence must begin with either a number (3, 5, 7, 10, 12, etc.), a verb ( discover, increase, create, compare, join, become, get, etc) or a question (why, what, when, who, where, how)

      3) Influential adjective or adverb ( free, new, instantly, secret, amazing, revolutionary, simple, easy, fast, effortlessly, miracle, suddenly, powerfull, etc)

      4) Keyword

      5) Promise (enticing for the targeted audience)

      It's simple and it works.

      But...

      I am always ready to give up my formula for adjusting to the situation, the market and the client. Because this is what distinguishes a parrot from a competent person.

      Therefore, I think formulas (in general) are valid but must be seen more as a starting point rather than an absolute rule.

      P.S. I think the yaayy / boo concept is interesting! But I imagine it will almost always contradict point one of my formula: the brevity. (Anyway many of the best Victor Schwab headlines were rather long, isn't? )
      Aha, Victor Schwab headlines are definitely a creativity booster. I often read them when words don't seem coming to me.
      I liked your default headline formula, but I am sure you are not limiting your creativity to some fix starting/middle/ending words (especially if you are a Schwab reader!).

      Speaking of Victor, do you remember the famous headline "They Laughed When I Sat Down At The Piano -- But When I Started To Play!"?

      Well, the guy behind ViralNova is just following this simple headline framework (for years now), and making a fortune out of it!

      I just learned it recently, and believe me, I am so excited to use it in my future ads/copies!

      Thanks for sharing your insights!
      Junaid
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      • Profile picture of the author Sven300
        Originally Posted by Junaid khawaja View Post

        Aha, Victor Schwab headlines are definitely a creativity booster. I often read them when words don't seem coming to me.
        LOL Me too!

        Originally Posted by Junaid khawaja View Post


        Speaking of Victor, do you remember the famous headline "They Laughed When I Sat Down At The Piano — But When I Started To Play!"?


        Well, the guy behind ViralNova is just following this simple headline framework (for years now), and making a fortune out of it!
        Interesting!
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