hi, hope I don't offend anyone by asking the wrong thing, this is my first visit to what looks like an amazing site. I have sweated blood over my squeeze and sales pages but I really could do with someone to cast an eye over it for any obvious (to someone more experienced than me that is) errors.
The video in the squeeze page will be there eventually, for now it's just the text.
In the sales page I really really need help with how to write the final sales bit and include all the bonus offers - i will have graphics for them eventually.
I've had to remove all the photos etc. to get it to load here so I hope it still makes sense