Salesletter Review Needed

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I really need some kind warriors to look at my salesletter and tell me what you think about it. Don't hold back, I really want this to be successful, so all critique is welcome.

Do NOT purchase through the link, if you happen to like the product. I will be posting it as a WSO, so warriors will get it free, with the ability to sell as an affiliate.

Anyway, please let me know what you think. This is my first salesletter, so I'm not entirely confident with it yet. It does look pretty good to me, though.

http://www.tipstofixcredit.com/CRBasics
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  • Chris,
    My very first comment is that your box looks out of proportion.
    I'll send you more comments a bit later.
    Kim
  • Yeah, that's my first box too.

    I'll play with it a little tonight and see if I can get it better.
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    • Nobody wants to 'learn about credit repair today".

      Think about the driving force for your product. It isn't even that people want to remove negative items from their credit report. What they really want is to be able to rent or buy a home, get a credit card, buy a car etc.

      Think about that and start over.
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  • Good point. I need to redo that.

    My goal right now is to get people into my list, in order to educate them on how to go about rebuilding their credit. I'm working at getting a series of reports on the subject, touching on the various aspects, but they will do you know good without knowing the basics. I see what you're saying, and will see what I can do with it.

    Thanks!
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    • Your goal, while admirable, will not sell product. Keep in mind, people don't want to "be educated". They want their problem solved quickly and easily.
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  • Yeah, I can see I'm going about it all wrong. I'm also using the $7 script, which is why there's so much "It's only $7" in there.

    Thanks for all the critique, and I hope you guys are willing to check it out again in round 2.
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    Salesletter Review Needed

    I really need some kind warriors to look at my salesletter and tell me what you think about it. Don't hold back, I really want this to be successful, so all critique is welcome. Do NOT purchase through the link, if you happen to like the product. I will be posting it as a WSO, so warriors will get it free, with the ability to sell as an affiliate.