Critique Request: Unlocking Writer's Block (Hypnosis Product)
Unlock Your Writer's Block
I'm interested, of course in what you think about the quality of the letter itself.
But I also have a few questions about formatting...
- is the Courier font ok?
- have I used enough white space?
- does the letter "flow"?
- do I need to add more pictures or anything to make the text less ... dense?
- is it a good idea to include the price of the product in a subhead? or should i tuck it away in a paragraph?
Last but not least, thanks a lot in advance!
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