What are the techniques copywriters should be forgetting about?

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Marketing has changed a lot in the last 10 years, the arrival of Social Media has changed all the rules, and copy writing cant escape this new reality.

I was just having a look at an old copy writing blog from ten years ago, I saw all this posts about old techniques and I thought: A lot of people are still using these techniques, what the hell are they thinking?

Some of these techniques that I think shouldnt be used any more are:

Customer testimonials: Remember when you get these emails or letters with customers testimonials? Like, Mrs Briggs tested our new shampoo and her life has improved!. So old, so antique, and yet people are still using these crappy testimonials in their websites or their Social Media channels.

The thing about them is that they look absolutely fake, specially if they are paired with the before and after photo. People will rather read true users review, that they can trust.

Limited-time offers: Another technique from the past that should be buried and forgotten, I came across with these annoying website with these cheap promotions: "limited offer for the next three hours". Right, im sure that if I came back tomorrow that offer will still be there.

Im not saying that special offers are useless right now, of course not, im saying that these limited-time offers dont work any more, consumers wont buy your products if you try to push them with that kind of stuff.

What other techniques do you think should be forgotten?
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  • Profile picture of the author GordonJ
    Originally Posted by DavidGWelch View Post

    Marketing has changed a lot in the last 10 years, the arrival of Social Media has changed all the rules, and copy writing cant escape this new reality.

    I was just having a look at an old copy writing blog from ten years ago, I saw all this posts about old techniques and I thought: A lot of people are still using these techniques, what the hell are they thinking?

    Some of these techniques that I think shouldnt be used any more are:

    Customer testimonials: Remember when you get these emails or letters with customers testimonials? Like, Mrs Briggs tested our new shampoo and her life has improved!. So old, so antique, and yet people are still using these crappy testimonials in their websites or their Social Media channels.

    The thing about them is that they look absolutely fake, specially if they are paired with the before and after photo. People will rather read true users review, that they can trust.

    Limited-time offers: Another technique from the past that should be buried and forgotten, I came across with these annoying website with these cheap promotions: "limited offer for the next three hours". Right, im sure that if I came back tomorrow that offer will still be there.

    Im not saying that special offers are useless right now, of course not, im saying that these limited-time offers dont work any more, consumers wont buy your products if you try to push them with that kind of stuff.

    What other techniques do you think should be forgotten?
    found in the numbers.

    Where is your proof these methods don't work? And you are saying a review is different from a testimonial, which could be true...but to toss out testimonials altogether, I'd need some proof.

    See, one of my biggest complaints against all you newer copywriters is, you aren't grounded in the sciences of DR, you like to use absolutes, you tell us what isn't working, you give some sort of a statistic, like 57% of people don't believe "hype" ads, which means 43% may still be susceptible to them..,

    and FORTUNES have been made on a 3% response rate to a cold list.

    Limited time offers work. PROVE it otherwise.

    I do agree if they are used, however, they need to be real. Prove this to your customers over time, and you have trained them to believe you, I have thousands of customers who know when I say it is going off the market, it goes.

    Social media hasn't changed basic human nature, and in fact, it helps rounding up the herd, and makes selling to them much easier, by USING the tested and proven by results and NUMBERS methods which produce results.

    You are wrong. Junaid is wrong. Instead of telling us all what is wrong with the OLD world methods, give us the PROOF you know what you're talking about. Where is the science behind these statements?

    Give me an old Bob Stone or Ben Suarez book on numbers, with BILLION dollar results to back them up over Guru Du Jour, especially a warrior, and I'll continue to chuckle my way to the bank.

    The beauty of direct response marketing is the numbers reveal the truth, and all your theories are exposed as what they really are; not very well researched opinions based on personal preference.

    And as for HYPE being dead, please visit the WSO and warriors for hire sections.

    GordonJ
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  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    What is up with all these newbs making massive sweeping generalizations?

    With few notable exceptions, none of these tactics is ever gonna die. None of the channels will ever really be tapped out.

    It simply comes down to:

    1) knowing your market
    2) having an offer that solves their problem
    3) finding them where they hang out

    Now, there is something to be said for inauthenticity. That CAN shoot you in the foot if you don't know what you're doing and you're just swiping or modeling without understanding HOW or WHY the thing initially worked.

    I can assure you, when John Carlton closes the Simple Writing System, that sucker is CLOSED. It's not a gimmick to get you to sign up because today's the last day....except it's still on sale tomorrow.

    Neither testimonials nor time based offers are dead. Learn how to use them properly and you might surprise yourself with the results.
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    • Profile picture of the author DWolfe
      Originally Posted by angiecolee View Post

      What is up with all these newbs making massive sweeping generalizations?.
      They are paid to come here to start a conversation, and when it does not go the direction they wish, then you have ruffled their feathers ! They don't know how to handle constructive criticism.

      Gambino in this thread post #8 has a link to what one is being paid
      http://www.warriorforum.com/off-topic-forum/1234760-fast-food-content-writing-who-blame.html
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  • Profile picture of the author Woomeister
    Avoid 'yeah, yeah' comments, generalisations and superlatives if you don't want to turn your readers off quickly.
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  • Profile picture of the author Woomeister
    Originally Posted by DavidGWelch View Post

    Marketing has changed a lot in the last 10 years, the arrival of Social Media has changed all the rules, and copy writing cant escape this new reality.

    I was just having a look at an old copy writing blog from ten years ago, I saw all this posts about old techniques and I thought: A lot of people are still using these techniques, what the hell are they thinking?

    Some of these techniques that I think shouldnt be used any more are:

    Customer testimonials: Remember when you get these emails or letters with customers testimonials? Like, Mrs Briggs tested our new shampoo and her life has improved!. So old, so antique, and yet people are still using these crappy testimonials in their websites or their Social Media channels.

    The thing about them is that they look absolutely fake, specially if they are paired with the before and after photo. People will rather read true users review, that they can trust.

    Limited-time offers: Another technique from the past that should be buried and forgotten, I came across with these annoying website with these cheap promotions: "limited offer for the next three hours". Right, im sure that if I came back tomorrow that offer will still be there.

    Im not saying that special offers are useless right now, of course not, im saying that these limited-time offers dont work any more, consumers wont buy your products if you try to push them with that kind of stuff.

    What other techniques do you think should be forgotten?
    I use limited time offers very successfully. Especially in my meta descriptions. Creating urgency works - fact, and its not pushy, it could be the difference between a lead or not just from your serps.

    Customer testimonials work also. Any fool can tell the difference between paid ones and otherwise.
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  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
    Proof and scarcity will never go out of style.

    How do I know?

    I know because the emotions that drive buyers don't (and won't) change.

    Platforms change. Tactics change. Buying emotions don't.

    Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidGWelch
    I appreciate your comments, I know many of you are experienced copy writers, so obviously I cant argue with you without having good arguments, which I have to say I dont, at least not at the depth you would like. However, I must say that its kind of disappointing that many of you mistreat my arguments because im a newbie. Of course im a Newbie, im learning, and one of the reasons I joined this community is precisely because I think I can learn a lot from experienced profesional like you.

    Regarding the points I raised in this thread, I recognized that some of my statements might have been too definitive or exaggerated, the point I was trying to make is that I believe there are some people out there that are still using old techniques that I believe are not working any more. I dont have any evidence to backed that statement, maybe one day I will have them, but thats not the case today.

    I was thinking about the before and after kind of ads, those are the type of advertising that I believe are not working anymore, but if you say they are, im sure I must be wrong.
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    • Profile picture of the author DABK
      This is where you went wrong, mon ami.

      You assumed something, then presented it as fact.

      Let's make some assumptions about you. Let's say, you're in the market for a red jacket and a pair of blue jeans. Let's assume you really want the jacket and the blue jeans but you only have money for one. Let's further assume that I, the owner of a clothing store, want to attract new people to my store by giving a pair of blue jeans for free to the first 10 people to buy a red jacket next week.

      Are you saying that, if you saw my scarcity ad on Sunday, you would not be coming to my store early on Monday because I'm using an old marketing tactic?


      Originally Posted by DavidGWelch View Post

      the point I was trying to make is that I believe there are some people out there that are still using old techniques that I believe are not working any more. I dont have any evidence to backed that statement, maybe one day I will have them, but thats not the case today.

      I was thinking about the before and after kind of ads, those are the type of advertising that I believe are not working anymore, but if you say they are, im sure I must be wrong.
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  • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
    However, I must say that its kind of disappointing that many of you mistreat my arguments because im a newbie.
    So sorry you feel that way. Actually, we are shooting down your arguments because they are wrong. You yourself said you have no basis whatsoever for saying them!

    Do you really think we should say you're right if you in fact are wrong? And that we should agree with anything said here without any evidence whatsoever?

    Marcia Yudkin
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  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    OP - I got news for ya dude. Part of my transition from newb to experienced copywriter was people calling me out on my assumptions and bullshit.

    You absolutely should start the convo if you want the education. But be self aware enough to know that you DON'T know what you don't know, not until someone tells you or you learn a life lesson.

    Here's my first lesson: there are no absolutes in this field. Nothing works 100% of the time. Nothing really dies unless it's a completely obsolete technology like BetaMax. There are different channels, different tactics, different copy approaches that work for different markets. There's a reason those "outdated" books a lot of the new people are referring to are STILL talked about to this day. The knowledge there is timeless, even if the technique is outdated and can be tweaked.

    You guys have got to learn to DIG and not get tripped up on very superficial shit.
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  • Profile picture of the author winbig007
    hi,

    I think you are listening to the wrong advice - maybe.

    I understand what you are saying - however, there's a stress test that as a writer you must use each time you write copy.

    Ask yourself this question:

    Is it believable?

    Too much hype can often leave the reader just saying, "this guy/gal is full of crap" - of course in cases like this, your testimonial and/or other writings become ineffective. This is why some "gurus" might be telling you the "old" ways don't work any longer. (maybe their writing is crap and they're trying to sell you something?)

    But I can tell you for sure, that using real and believable testimonials, statistics, proof and old techniques still work today.

    That's not to say that verbiage needs to be modernized, it does.

    I hope that helps.
    Tony
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