Hey professional copywriters!! I need your comments.. Right now i did up this simple picture pre-video page ( yes it means, i am pre-selling the idea into the view even before the squeeze page, something like a Pre-squeeze SQUEEZE page). I need your criticisms! I just started trying this copywriting skill not long ago and i don't think I am up to the cut yet.. Any comments will be deeply appreciated! Thanks! Oh, the link is on my signature..