Copy critique needed

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Hi Everyone,

Could I please ask you to have a look at my site, and specifically, the copy?

http://www.mindfullifemethod.com

I plan to add an op-in section for my free report soon.

Basically...is the site appealing, is the message and benefits clear, etc?

I'm new to copywriting as you will see. I'm vague and wordy by nature, so I tried to clean that up.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Thanks a lot,

Theo
#copywriting #critique #needed #website
  • Hi Theodosios,

    I like what you're doing. I'm a big fan of self improvement.

    It looks like you're off to a good start.

    One thing I noticed right away. About 1/3 of the way down,



    The ones down by the picture of your program are pretty close together, also.


    There's a couple other things I noticed. But I haven't really read your entire page yet. So far I just skimmed it and figured I'd offer you that little bit of advice to start.

  • Website needs designing, too much scrolling for content on single page does not work fine, different content pages too be made, Payment or Contact page different, Books(s) View different, About You next page, Testimonials/ Results page, etc. with other things as per your content/images.
    Your website needs good fresh layout as it deals with stress management, the content font should match with layout.
    Rest all you see on various other sites for your comparison
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