Experts please critique - Landing page
Thank you in advance, feel free to let loose with all constructive criticism or things I did well with (for future pages). This is my first official squeeze or landing page. I am helping someone with it and have tested it with facebook ads. So far with 195 clicks there is 24 opt ins (little over 8%).
I think a page like this should be able to get a better % and would like to know what you warriors think.
Appreciate it.
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