First Salesletter - Your critique and feed back please!
Folks,
I have just spent two weeks of my life writing my FIRST sales letter, and even I can tell...masterpiece, it's not.
LINK REMOVED (am not yet allowed to post links because of my low post count)
Please, give me some feedback and critique so it at least has some chance of converting. YOUR HELP IS MOST APPRECIATED!
Thanks folks
-Ritesh
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