Where is this Sales Copy Weak?
I've probably spent 100 hours on this copy for a conversation skills program. I'm no pro copywriter, but what I've got is based on research and I've put so much thought into it. Maybe the amount of time I've put into it has backfired into a copy piece too large.
Here it is: Big Talk: Effortlessly Talk to Win Friends with the Real You
Conversions were at 3% upon launching, but now it's plummeted to something like 0.5%, which I'm horrified by because it's not bad copy.
I'd like whatever feedback you have on it. I'm really stumped as to why conversions are crap.
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