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WORM CASTINGS - GARDEN GOLD [HEADLINE]
FRESH VEGETABLES WITHOUT CHEMICALS [SUBHEADING]
Sound Good to You? That's Right. No Chemicals. Pure and Organic. 100%.
Healthy Fruits and Vegetables for You and Your Family
JUICY TOMATOES AND LEAFY GREENS [SUBHEADING]
Beautiful, Firm, Red Tomatoes. Crispy, Leafy Romaine and Butter Lettuce.
Vitamin-Nutrient Rich Greens, Collards, Kale, Beets and Cabbage.
BLACK GOLD BOUNTIFUL HARVEST [SUBHEADING]
There is No Secret to Such Goodness. You Can Do It. Black Gold or Worm
Castings. A Cupful Per Seedling. And You are on Your Way.
REDWORM DIET OF VEGGIE SCRAPS AND HORSIE MANURE [SUBHEADING]
Castings You Purchase are 100% Organic and Worms Thrive on a Diet of Veggie
Scraps and Horse Manure. Redworms Produce a Fresh, Earthy-Smelling, Nutritious
Plant Food that You Just Cannot Purchase in Any Store. I Guarantee It!
5 gal. bucket of castings is $30.
PLEASE BRING YOUR OWN 5 GAL BUCKETS.
HOME DEPOT HAS 5 GAL BUCKETS FOR $3
Castings can be picked up 7 days a week - TEXT for times.
Must have a couple of days notice as I work a regular job, too.
TESTIMONIALS:
"If you are in need of great quality worm castings or looking to start a
worm compost bin of your own, then John is your guy! He is extremely
knowledgeable, thoughtful and dedicated to doing what he does.
I have been getting castings and worms from John for a little over a year
now and I would not think to go anywhere other than Redwoms Rock!
The castings are always rich and clean smelling. I use the castings mainly
to build a living soil from scratch but they are excellent for making microbe
tea as well. I consider John an exemplary humanitarian, public servant and
steward of this planet we all share. Send John a text, you will be glad you did!"
-Matt V. from San Marcos
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Excellent product! I love what these castings do for my plants.
In addition, I get an education on keeping my worms healthy and happy.
John is friendly and generous with his knowledge. Thanks again!
Terrie P. --- Escondido
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Redworms Rock is located in San Marcos. I have been raising redworms
since 2012. My name is John - reply to this ad for more info and directions
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