Looking for a copy critique (this is rough draft) so tear it apart
Yes it's old school (non VSL) but my old school non vsl's are still working fairly well seeing gross epc's of $3-$6, which I'm sure ain't any thing to write home about, but no too shabby either.
Here's the url: http://www.leadleviathan.com/1.htm
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