The offer is a web and search marketing custom video analysis - this specific list is going to contractors. The front of the card has an eye catching image with pretty bold claims about business failure rates. I like the front of the card.
Side B is what i'm having some trouble with - actually closing on the CTA.
I would like to stick with simple - adding only the basic steps and information needed for the prospect to understand what to do - hand holding if you will.
I saw this image (attached) and thought it stood out - and nicely outlined the easy 1,2,3 steps I want them to take in order to get the free video. However...my actual copy suffers as I am by no means a copywriter. I came up with a rough idea of -
"1. Call (phone number)
2. Receive a personal complimentary website & search analysis video in 24 hours
3. Follow our free tips and start getting more phone calls immediately"
*I will also include an expiration date graphic that will stand out
I know I know -- this is likely terrible. I can't seem to formulate how I want to say it. But the main goal is I want them to call me, answer a couple very basic qualifier questions, get their website info, and email address to send the video to.
I'm not pushing my main services right now, simply offering a complimentary service.
Hopefully I have given enough information.