
Roast My Landing Pages - Need help with CB Landing Pages
So i am running CB + Bing and is having some trouble on identifying what makes a good LP.
1. Is this a bad template? On mobile user have to scroll quite a bit.
2. Is my landing page copy okay? Not a great writer but I did studied a lot on writing copies but am not sure if i am highlighting the benefits well enough.
Roast way no mercy



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Making Calls To Sell Something? What are you actually saying?
Is there any room for improvement? Want to find out?
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Making Calls To Sell Something? What are you actually saying?
Is there any room for improvement? Want to find out?
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