Roast My Landing Pages - Need help with CB Landing Pages
So i am running CB + Bing and is having some trouble on identifying what makes a good LP.
1. Is this a bad template? On mobile user have to scroll quite a bit.
2. Is my landing page copy okay? Not a great writer but I did studied a lot on writing copies but am not sure if i am highlighting the benefits well enough.
Roast way no mercy
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Making Calls To Sell Something? What are you actually saying?
Is there any room for improvement? Want to find out?
Making Calls To Sell Something? What are you actually saying?
Is there any room for improvement? Want to find out?
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