I'd really appreciate any feedback you could give me on this letter. It's the first one I have done and I have rewritten it a few times already. I took out all the contact information so it won't be promotional.
How Working with COMPANY NAME Can Boost Your ROI, Set Your Company Apart, and Lower Your Blood Pressure
Φ The Creed
Unlike many copywriters, I don't care about flashiness. I don't write with my ego. I only write to increase your ROI or return on investment, and to help you set your company apart from the competition.
For most of the small to medium businesses that I serve, they can't afford to spend thousands on marketing if it doesn't work and doesn't give them dramatic results.
I strive to give you marketing and advertising writing that either brings in more money than it costs or helps strengthen the image of your company. Either way it is really valuable writing. No gimmicks, half naked ladies used to sell products (I don't do graphic design anyway), and no words that don't sell.
Φ Lower My Blood Pressure?
I know that in your business the stakes are high; I want to make your life easier. Every day, you have enough things going wrong and enough days where your head feels like it will explode.
You need a good copywriter. But you also need someone who is relaxing to work with and who always meets deadlines. I am that copywriter.
My goal is to make your time with me as convenient as possible. And if you find you're more relaxed, and I think you will, your blood pressure will go down.
Φ This Summer Only: Free Ten-Hour Writing Project
Finding a good freelance writer can be really hard. Finding one you trust can be harder than finding the right lover.
I know you're concerned about the skill, professionalism, and even the personality of the people you choose to hire. And you don't want to just take me for my word when I say I write well.
So, until September 21st 2018, I am offering new clients their first project for free. Because I can't work for free forever, the project must take less than 10 hours to complete. After you get the writing, I think you'll want to continue working with me, but if you don't, there's absolutely no obligation.
Getting a free project means you can see that I can write, and you can see what working with me will be like. It means taking the first step in showing you that I am trustworthy and here to help.
But if my schedule fills before the deadline, and I feel that I can't take on any more work, I'll end this offer before the date. For the fastest way to get in touch with me, call my personal phone at to schedule a ten-minute meeting today; this way, you can be sure to get the offer.
Φ How Do I Know You're the Right Writer for Me?
I am not the right writer for every company, and there are some areas I don't feel comfortable in like T.V. commercial writing, and speech writing. If I am not qualified to do your project, I will tell you before we start.
The best way to know for sure is to look at my portfolio at URL
Or to schedule a ten-minute meeting. During the meeting I'll ask you a few questions to determine what your goals are and if I'd be a good fit for you. I can also tell you more about past work I've done.
Φ What I Specialize in
My specialty is online and print marketing writing with a focus on ROI and positioning. There are a lot of more specific topics that I am not an expert in, but I can write about after careful research and studying.
I have written about topics like impaired driving legislation, private catering, trade expos, LGBT travel, hip-hop luxury jewelry, Chinese culture, historical societies and others that I am not a field expert in.
Φ More Information about Me
Go to my website to see my list of services, portfolio, client list, blog and more about what I do: URL
Φ Free Ten-Minute Consultation
If you work in Manhattan, The Five Boroughs, or Long Island I would be willing to come to you for an introductory meeting. If not, I am available for a free telephone meeting to talk about your project. Call me at or email me at EMAIL.
I expect my schedule to fill up by September. And I take projects based on who calls me first. For the best chance of getting your first project free, and catching me with an open schedule, call me today.
I am a relative newcomer to copywriting, but because I have been writing at a professional level for around a decade, my writing skills are well above an amateur level. Since I have started my copywriting business, I have worked with many different kinds of writing, for many different clients.
I graduated from Stony Brook University where I studied and practiced journalism for years.
I also spent more than a year teaching English for a company in Guangzhou, China. There I studied English grammar and Mandarin Chinese, and I helped my company with their marketing and sales writing.
To see exactly what experience I have please go to my portfolio.
"I am writing this letter first off to confirm that Nicholas Vetri did help out my small catering company with delivering the services of copy-writing. Nicholas has done this with great skill, but Nicholas has also gone over and beyond by getting my name out there with bigger organizations. I highly recommend Nicholas in his capacity in what he is doing. He is friendly young man with great willingness to do the work he has promised and needs no reminding or checking up on his progress.
Well done Nicholas!"
Marius du Plessis- owner of Cooking Bald private catering.
Φ Call Now for a Free Project While There is Time in my Schedule
Call me today to schedule a free, ten-minute meeting to see if I'd be right for you. I may be available to write for you later, but the free project will only be around until September, if that. So call me today. I'll give you a free project, and you'll see how high-quality, practical writing can revolutionize your marketing.
Nicholas Vetri 7/20/2018
Please note that my phone number will change after August 28th, 2018. But my email and URL will be the same.
Never underestimate the value of good marketing writing. I hope you'll give me a chance to show you what I can do, free of charge.