Hi GlenH,

Sure, you can post a headline here. And you may get all sorts of critiques / feedback.

Although, if you'd like more than just vague, random opinions, it might help if you include a few details about your offer, along with the headline.

At least some basic stuff like


- what is your offer about (beyond the headline)
- who is your target market
- why are you selling this now
- what do you want your reader to do after seeing your offer


Even after all of that, it's still just going to be opinion. And the only opinion that really matters is the opinion of your market. But at least someone here might be able to look at it and tell you if it's fundamentally solid.


All the best,
SAR