Email Copywriting - Criticism Wanted...
So I'm currently working on a piece of software (edited by mod)
The software generates email promotional follow-ups (and A LOT MORE!)
All you have to do is fill in the blanks and the software will generate over 20 unique follow-ups based on your input.
Please read over a few messages that I've shared below and let me know what you copywriters think as for helping to promote products thru email.
I'd greatly appreciate HELPFUL criticism only. If you believe that it should be better in some aspects, then please be sure to be specific:
Subject: Another [PRODUCT-NAME] Feature - [SOME FEATURE-BENEFITS]... BODY: Hey [FIRST-NAME], There's another [SOME FEATURE] feature that I haven't told you about.... The [SOME FEATURE] feature [SOME FEATURE-BENEFITS]! You can learn a little more about this [SOME FEATURE] feature right below: >> [PRODUCT-WEBSITE] << I don't want to bog you down by listings all of the POWERFUL features that this [PRODUCT-TYPE] has to offer, so that's why I prefer that you take a quick look for yourself on this page below. Again, you can check them all out right here: >> [PRODUCT-WEBSITE] << By the way [FIRST-NAME], what are your thoughts about [PRODUCT-NAME]? As I've already mentioned before, I know that it's DEFINITELY going to help you along the way. I'm not sure how much longer that [PRODUCT-NAME] is going to be set at this low price for, so again, I think that it would be best for you to act now before it's too late to get it for this CHEAP..... Get it right now while you can! >> [PRODUCT-WEBSITE] << Prices will soon reach $[HIGHEST-PRICE]! Kind Regards, [FULL-NAME] [BRAND-NAME] [PRODUCT-WEBSITE] [EMAIL-ADDRESS] [BUSINESS-ADDRESS] |
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