5 replies
Here's some of my copy that I'm asking for feedback / tips to improve please.



It's for a landing page, most traffic from Google Search ads (highly targeted, mostly people searching for 'Website design Wellington').

Heading 1...
Website design
that generate sales


Heading 2 (sub heading just below H1)...
Web design Wellington, converting visitors into customers, since 2009

And my first block of (large font) sales copy (which has a CTA button below it)...
What is the purpose of web design? It's relatively easy to design a beautiful website but it's useless if it doesn't generate customers for you. For a website to get real results, it also needs proven Infinity digital marketing elements to convert visitors into customers.
#copy #sales
Avatar of Unregistered
  • Profile picture of the author DWolfe
    Originally Posted by webinfinitynz View Post

    Here's some of my copy that I'm asking for feedback / tips to improve please.

    it also needs proven Infinity digital marketing elements
    Get rid of that sentence right ! A business owner does not care about that stuff, they want results.
    Signature
    Solopreneurs: Get up to 97% off! Sale begins March 12, midnight ET. at Namecheap.com https://www.namecheap.com/promos/mak...GR_PR_20240310
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[11558434].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author webinfinitynz
    Thanks DWolfe.


    So maybe this?
    It's relatively easy to design a beautiful website but it's useless if it doesn't generate customers for you. For a website to get real results, it also needs content and elements to convert visitors into customers.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[11558441].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author webinfinitynz
      I ended up with the same H1 and H2 then the copy below being;

      It's relatively easy to design a beautiful website but it's useless if it doesn't generate customers for you. For a website to get real results, it also needs content to convert visitors into customers.
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[11558463].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author DABK
        Is Your Website Costing You Clients?
        Get Your Website To Sell More

        The average website converts 2% of visitors; well -
        designed websites convert 15-20%.

        If you are like most business owners, your site converts
        1 or 2 out of every 10 visitors but could with a bit of
        copy make-over convert 5 to 10 times more.

        What would you do with all that extra money in your pocket?
        Would you go on a long vacation? Buy a boat?

        Getting that much more money is easier than you think:
        A website design make-over is easy if you work with me.

        I have redone x # of websites, increasing their conversions by
        50 to 273%.

        Here is what My Happy Client 1 says about me:
        "Rave review"

        The process is simple. I analyze your site; I come with a
        plan if action; I implement. If I do not, at least, get you 50% more
        conversions, I will refund you amm my fee + $500 for wasting your
        time.

        Contact me now to take get your website to put more
        money into your pocket at...
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[11558472].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author Jamell
    I notice that your landing page has 2 headings stating different things which is confusing . I think your CTA needs to be more definitive and direct .
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[11559546].message }}
Avatar of Unregistered

Trending Topics