Help needed with review of WSO / sales copy
I'm lousy at copywriting, so I'm looking to make some improvements all round.
The WSO was here: http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...pare-time.html
And the site it directs you to is here: How To Write And Sell Software For A Living
These are the overall results of my WSO at the time I closed it and put the price back up:
WSO Views 572
Unique Visitors 147
Unique Order Page 36
Number of Sales 6
Spent $60 Initial + 2 bounces
Earned $280 4x$35 + 2x$55
CTR = 25.7%
To order page = 24.5%
Conversion Rate= 4.08%
As you can see, profitable, but not world shattering , which is good, since I was mainly aiming for testing affiliate software, visitor tracking, and the sales automation process.
I've got split testing software installed, so it's easy for me to add in additional elements. I was hoping I could get some suggestions about wording, approaches, what elements in the WSO would be good candidates for the main sales page, that kind of thing.
Thanks
Roger
Roger Willcocks
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Stop by Paul's Pub - my little hangout on Facebook.
Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
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Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
Please vote to help me win a 3kW solar array
Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
Please vote to help me win a 3kW solar array
Stop by Paul's Pub - my little hangout on Facebook.
Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
Please vote to help me win a 3kW solar array
Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
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Roger Willcocks
L-Space Design
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