Any suggestions for this sweepstakes promotional text?

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I'll promote an iPhone X sweepstake that'll require users to type their email address. I'd like to know what you think about this promotional text:

Win an iPhone X today by taking part in this free sweepstake. All you need to do is to type your email address and you'll be notified if you win!

Any suggestions?
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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    "promotional text"?


    It's identical to many other scam iphone 'giveaways' advertised. Have you checked the legality of it? In some countries there are laws that require odds of winning to be listed, date of drawing to be listed, an address where a list of 'winners' will be posted or can be requested.


    I would not give my email address after reading that copy...but others may feel differently.
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