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Can you give me some feedback...

by Bart Loos
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Hey there,

I have a new squeezepage up here

Can you let me know what you think about it.

Thx!

Bart

Update 11/06 : redone the page & added bullet points with specific benefits
#feedback #give
  • Profile picture of the author ryanmberg
    Hi Bart,

    I like the simple layout of the page.

    I think you need to put more focus on *specific* benefits though.... beyond just "feeling confident and successful". What does that really translate to as far as...

    * Results in someone's business
    * Enhancement of their lifestyle
    * Emotional benefits (more enjoyment, less stress, etc.)
    * Achieving a higher and better version of themselves
    * Etc.

    Also, what specific frustrations and problems do business owners have that you can really agitate?

    I think the video quality is pretty good, but there are a couple things that are hard to understand with your accent. Don't let that discourage you from doing video. You may just want to supplement the video with some bullets, etc. to make sure the page nails all the key points.

    Ryan
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    • Profile picture of the author Bart Loos
      Originally Posted by ryanmberg View Post

      Hi Bart,

      I like the simple layout of the page.

      I think you need to put more focus on *specific* benefits though.... beyond just "feeling confident and successful". What does that really translate to as far as...

      * Results in someone's business
      * Enhancement of their lifestyle
      * Emotional benefits (more enjoyment, less stress, etc.)
      * Achieving a higher and better version of themselves
      * Etc.

      Also, what specific frustrations and problems do business owners have that you can really agitate?

      I think the video quality is pretty good, but there are a couple things that are hard to understand with your accent. Don't let that discourage you from doing video. You may just want to supplement the video with some bullets, etc. to make sure the page nails all the key points.

      Ryan

      Good idea to add some extra bullets, and pointing out more specific benefits vs frustrations and problems.

      Thx for the feedback!

      Bart
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  • Profile picture of the author EaglePiServ
    I would add a video in that blank space to the left. Tell them why they need to sign up now. As it sits, it's kinda naked, and there's no compelling reason for someone to enter in their name and email.

    Cheers.
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    • Profile picture of the author Bart Loos
      Originally Posted by EaglePiServ View Post

      I would add a video in that blank space to the left. Tell them why they need to sign up now. As it sits, it's kinda naked, and there's no compelling reason for someone to enter in their name and email.

      Cheers.
      Hey Eagle

      Thx for pointing this out, I should have tested it different browser versions. I guess you're on IE6, which indeed shows up a blank space, but works fine in IE7-8, chrome, flock, Firefox.

      Anyone smart outthere who might know how to fix that?

      www.businessmindsetsecrets.com


      Bart
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