Sales letter layout and formatting
I have looked at a number of sales letters and noticed that most use different fonts, colocs, highlighting etc. for example (i hope you dont mind)
noriskcopy.com
resultscopywriting.com
I know they are both written by experienced professionals and therefore must work.
However, when i see a webpage written in this format my first reaction is oh they are just trying to sell something and click back. I am a software consultant/programmer so not sure it this has anything to do with my reaction.
The sales page i wrote is following similiar style but it does not convert
independentcomputerconsultant.com
On the other hand a much simpler page that i did on payloadz does convert eventhough not well
store.payloadz.com/details/241321-eBooks-Computers-Tips-For-Independent-Computer-Consultants.html
amazon.com/Tips-For-Independent-Computer-Consultants/dp/B001XUQXSY/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=digital-text&qid=1257651304&sr=1-1
My question is, is it just my personal experience that causes me to react negatively to the traditional style sales letters or does it have something to do with me being a "computer guy" and since my product is for computer people i should create a more conservative sales page?
PS Sorry but it does not allow me to post links.
Thank you
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