Please Critique My Sales Page - ChristmasTrivia.ca
Please critique my sales page for my new clickbank product.
I think I may not be communicating the "fun" and "wide appeal"
that trivia has after you've played it.
Any ideas?
Also open to other areas of critique - and don't be nice. That doesn't help much. Tell me how to make this convert for people sending it to their own friends and family, co-workers, etc. If I can break that barrier, it will work.
PS. Email me from the address on the site and tell me your comments
and I will send you a gift...which I guess I can't name unless its a WSO.
But I think you are smart enough to know. :rolleyes:
christmastrivia.ca ( also the site in sig below )
=== UPDATE
So far 10 members have replied - thanks to all. All great stuff here
... keep it coming! I will be making changes!
The shortage of copy is due the "above the fold" intent
and the fact that "I really don't know what else to add"
and I don't expect people to spend a half hour on the page.lol
I will however push the RESULT obtained from purchasing the
product which is friends/family time together ...fun ..good experiences.
Can anyone suggest some HEADLINES or some BULLETS?
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