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I am not a professional Copywriter, but, I learned some stuff from a couple top guys.
The one thing I always get caught up on is Headlines.

Mal lamb used to post in here a lot, he is a pretty good copy guy too. He wrote a copy piece one time, that I seem to recall, had deep fried chicken ass included in it.

So I was sitting here wondering...

How would you write a headline for Deep Fried Chicken Ass? There is seriously a youtube video that defines the chicken ass, as, crispy on the outside and juicy inside
OMG. I was nearly sick. LOL

So. Headline Challenge.

Your mission, should you accept it, is to sell as many Deep Fried Chicken Asses as you can. Grab my attention, because, without it? I never know your pitch.

Deep Fried Chicken Ass.
When The Breasts Just Don't Do It.


If anyone wants to join in , let's have some fun.
Always Onwards
-WD
#challenge #headline
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    Time To Become A Vegetarian?"




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    • Profile picture of the author DABK
      I am betting you've just made Colonel Sanders turn and twist in his grave and slapping his forehead: Why didn't I think of that?


      Originally Posted by Princess Balestra View Post

      Deep Fried Chicken Ass
      You Get Your Tongue In Here,
      It Ain't Leavin' Any Time Soon

      Steve, I bet you just made the Colonel hopping mad and wondering what planet you've been living on that you have not heard of bbq sauce and the 11 spices. Because, c'mon, man, this surely is a headline for an ad for a new sauce. No?


      Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter View Post

      "Deep Fried Chicken Ass

      Time To Become A Vegetarian?"
      Steve
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  • Yes, the sauces are for vegetarian chicken with a vegan option!


    Steve
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    After Tasting Juicy Deep Fried Chicken Ass...

    Just a quick one for fun...
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  • Profile picture of the author Claude Whitacre
    Originally Posted by WD Mino View Post

    I am not a professional Copywriter, but, I learned some stuff from a couple top guys.
    The one thing I always get caught up on is Headlines.

    Mal lamb used to post in here a lot, he is a pretty good copy guy too. He wrote a copy piece one time, that I seem to recall, had deep fried chicken ass included in it.

    So I was sitting here wondering...

    How would you write a headline for Deep Fried Chicken Ass? There is seriously a youtube video that defines the chicken ass, as, crispy on the outside and juicy inside
    OMG. I was nearly sick. LOL

    So. Headline Challenge.

    Your mission, should you accept it, is to sell as many Deep Fried Chicken Asses as you can. Grab my attention, because, without it? I never know your pitch.

    Deep Fried Chicken Ass.
    When The Breasts Just Don't Do It.


    If anyone wants to join in , let's have some fun.
    Always Onwards
    -WD
    With A Name Like Deep Fried Chicken Ass....You Know It's Got To Be Great!


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    The Flavor Of Deep Fried Chicken....At Chicken Ass Prices
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  • Profile picture of the author Troy Arrandale
    Mino, I like yours. And the vegetarian one.

    Deep Fried Chicken Ass

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