First attempt at ad copy
I've been working on this ad copy with a friend for .. ever it seems. I read all the Dan Kenedy books and etc., applied as much as I could and this is where it ends. If anyone could shed some thoughts on it, I'd greatly appreciate it. Almost ready for a full launch.
Also, my first attempt at that style of a design - it was hard weeding out all the graphic bells and whistles but I couldn't do the standard sales page template look. I'm so used to designing corporate style pages so this was a challenge - conforming to the long page vs. multi pages and etc.
the squeeze page is here
and to bypass that is the welcome page here
Thank you!
Gil-Ad Schwartz
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