You have been asked this before. But have a look

Will download Kompozer but isnt it similar to Nvu or PageBreeze? the problem is everytime I edit it, it looks fine until I save it and then something goes wrong with the formatting and everything is all over the place some centre some left aligned n stuff like that.

Thanks for the critique. will put something above the bullet points.

Sales page link sorted now. And yea you do get redirected to the sales page after the opt-in. I will put up a story/review of some sort when I get any. Don't wanna put something fake.

Auto responder yes. Series, If you mean auto responder email copies then no. For now I've only got a welcome email after the double opt-in.

Like I said I can't afford a copy writer. The initial plan to be totally honest when I was in the final stages of the product creation I saw my money out the window at such a speed I knew I would be left with no nothing to market it.(Marketing is another issue I'm worries about but we are only discussing the copy here) So the initial plan was to get some copywriting services and share the revenue. But after thorough reading of the forums most copywriters are pissed off at this kind of approach anyway that people are asking for free copywriting services for lame products with no potential or are willing to pay the least amount. So I didn't approach anyone in this regard.

The link to sales page is working now and you can have a look if you want. Thanks again.

That is a good idea. I may tweak my squeeze page with this headline (with your permission) and a paragraph and then the opt-in form.

I was thinking of a short video myself to be honest would download camtasia trial n stuff and do audio on it with a few bullet points going in the video. Might as well do it anytime now.

Thanks for the ideas everyone.

That headline makes no sense unless your dealing with a group of people who want to public speak....

because it basically says "Want to know why people are scared to public speak"...So unless your target demographic wants to know that, then you've lost them from the get go.

Do some research dude.

From my brief research, which covers companies who spend hundreds of thousands of dollars (if not millions) studying their markets I would recommend.

"Tired Of Settling For Less?"

Studies Show Low Self Esteem Does Have It's Rewards:

Less Money, Less Opportunity, Less Respect Oh Did I Mention LESS SEX!

Scarier yet is if you don't nip this problem in the butt now, you'll risk passing those traits onto your children.

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Still on the fence whether you've got an issue with self esteem? Try my FREE Esteem Assessment on the next page. I'll just need your permission by entering your name in the box on the right.

(this section eliminates the prospects fear of admitting they have a problem. Their just taking a short assessment....Not to mention it positions you as the expert just by providing a test....Oh, and did I mention if they prove to have a problem and you offer a solution, that you might sell some stuff?)

Get away from name and email double opts. go to an email, single opt. It nearly doubled my business.

Are you in love with that book cover or what? It takes up the whole dang page. Trim it down and give me some bullets that make me lust over what you have to offer (EVEN IF IT'S FREE)

Good luck man, keep up the good work.

Dude if I didn't like you so darn much I'd call you a retard....

Anyway great research you found out that people are SCARED OF PUBLIC SPEAKING because they lack confidence....I could have told you that.

Here's the deal dude....You dragged your research lab over to the wrong shop. Admirable effort but WRONG!

*Just so I don't appear to be hounding MetroSexual or whatever he is, I'm just giving him crap because i like him and his work....

What you need to do is head your lab over to Amazon.com and look at the bullets on the back of each and every confidence book they have.

Publishing companies spend MILLIONS researching what consumers in every niche are looking for and What problems are keeping them from catching some ZZZZZ's....

I assure you there's far more people in America losing sleep over

NOT GETTING LAID
NOT GETTING MONEY AND/OR
NOT GETTING RESPECT AND/OR
SCREWING UP THERE KIDS/FAMILY

Then there is worrying about: "How do I get the confidence to public speak"....I mean dude, really?

Here's Confidence Case Study: A pimpled face dweeb in high school is poppin more Ambien than an Eminem Road show, losing sleep over how he's going to find a date to prom and where he's going to find money to buy a rubber....

Here's what's not happening: Pimple faced dweeb lying in bed puzzling over "How can I get the confidence to give a speech...THAT I DON'T EVER HAVE TO GIVE".

Please keep in mind: I'm just humoring my good buddy MetroSexonicity or whatever the name....

It's kinda like one of those 2nd grade crushes where you pick on girl cause you like her...Only I'm 34, hopefully he's not a girl, and the girl would have to be Waaaaaay better looking...I'm just sayin.

Eric Medemaricity...

"Tired of Settling for Less?" - that's the on-target world-beating headline is it? How about "Tired of Settling for Tired Old Headlines?"

BTW "public speaking" encompasses all sorts of things - standing up in class and talking, doing a presentation for work colleagues, reading the eulogy at a funeral, giving the best-man's speech, talking to strangers in a group situation. So it probably needs to be qualified in the body copy. As in "Do you s**t yourself when the teacher asks you to stand up in class and give your opinion? Are you terrified to give a presentation at work? Are you dreading giving the best-man's speech...yada yada yada

Just found another reference to "What are People Most Afraid of?" - from Ask.