Need Copy Written Badly?

by mathiaslebesby

Posted: 14 years ago 11 replies

COPY WRITING

I think this adsense ad was pretty funny.

#badly #copy #written

Raydal 14 years ago

That's funny for sure. Goes in my bloopers book.

-Ray Edwards
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Moolah_Copywriting 14 years ago

Ouch... I hope they are paying at least $5 a click as a Stupid Tax
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- Lucius 14 years ago
  
  So simple. So effective. Gets my attention but not sure I'd click on her site. What is interesting here is that this is just scarcastic copy and dry humour typical of the UK/Eire/Aus/SA/NZ where it's fairly commonplace. It's a cultural thing
  Taking the Piss.
  Americans don't always get it. That's the problem.
  
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Loren Woirhaye 14 years ago

It is funny, but it arrests attention. It is effectively
interruptive.

I am not saying it shows competence, but think about
this: we want to enter the dialog in the prospects
head. If he or she is in a desperate state, needing
"badly" to fix a problem, this ad might work.

I'm not defending the ad - but understand when somebody
says "I'm hurt bad" they are speaking directly of their
pain. It is unfiltered by grammar. If a prospect is thinking
"I have a bad problem", the word "badly" may speak to
that state of mind directly.

Of course you see things written like this ad from time to
time and they are funny because they can be read two
ways.
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lightcam 14 years ago

We all love double entendre.... in fact

- this guy walks into a bar and orders a double entendre....

so the barman gives him one.
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Mr. Enthusiastic 14 years ago

Funny thread. The ironic thing is that you don't have to pay. Plenty of Warriors are willing to write your copy badly right here, just for the exposure.

Chris
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copious 14 years ago

Hmmm... it's either brilliant or a flop. I'm not sure which one. My first guess was the latter. But I'm a newbie - I could be wrong.
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rawservices 14 years ago

I like a woman who tells it like it is. Aussie writer based in london.

At least I know what Im getting with this LOL!
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Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter 14 years ago

The link in the pic isn't correct. The correct link is http://www.TapDancingOnThinIce.com
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